Planetary Alignments of my Universe

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Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Thu Feb 04, 2016 1:40 am

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by Hardeep » Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:03 am

:cry: ......You made this?......
There never was much hope... just a fool's hope

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by DoomCarrot » Fri Feb 05, 2016 2:39 pm

This is very good, you should deffinately keep writing!
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by COOLguy » Fri Feb 05, 2016 2:47 pm

Yes, it is very nice!
Thanks!
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Sat Feb 06, 2016 2:22 am

Thanks.

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Sat Jun 25, 2016 8:45 pm

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by COOLguy » Sun Jun 26, 2016 6:20 am

That is beautiful.
Thanks!
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Sun Jun 26, 2016 3:40 pm

Thank you

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:11 pm

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by Alpha » Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:43 pm

I am out of words......... These poems will be amazing in AOS and AOF
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by MightyGuy » Sun Oct 30, 2016 8:13 pm

beautiful peom! i love it! :D
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by DoomCarrot » Thu Nov 03, 2016 2:36 am

Wow, that last poem is very well done :)
The day is coming when a single carrot, freshly observed, will set off a revolution.

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by FiredClay » Sat Nov 05, 2016 1:15 am

Thank you. I have an odd feeling as though its only half finished but it will have to wait for the word to flow in sweet eloquence.

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by MightyGuy » Sat Nov 05, 2016 1:51 am

very nice! goodluck!
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by DoomCarrot » Sat Nov 05, 2016 6:14 pm

FiredClay wrote:Thank you. I have an odd feeling as though its only half finished but it will have to wait for the word to flow in sweet eloquence.
Maybe because the poem sets up a question with multiple hypotheses, but never reveals the answer? I don't think that is necessarily "missing" anything, as I am assuming it is the purpose for love to be left undefined in the poem, but I could see why that might create some kind of expectation for more. :)
The day is coming when a single carrot, freshly observed, will set off a revolution.

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The flow of words in sweet eloquence

Post by FiredClay » Mon Nov 14, 2016 11:50 pm

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Souls Defined

Post by FiredClay » Tue Nov 22, 2016 1:36 am

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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by Alpha » Tue Nov 22, 2016 2:00 am

My word......
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by MightyGuy » Tue Nov 22, 2016 5:26 am

lovely....
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Re: Planetary Alignments of my Universe

Post by DoomCarrot » Tue Nov 22, 2016 3:48 pm

Nice style :)
The day is coming when a single carrot, freshly observed, will set off a revolution.

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